As/Is

12.15.2004

a whispered celebration on the birthday of my first love

the everything you were to me
has ceased to linger

but the numbers hold in mind
apart from their accompanying qualitative data

so here you are young in that piecemeal frame
I fail to polish but regard before moving ahead

to remember that the law of averages
can be splintered into templates

one can worship until fatigue sets in when words
my father said come back to fit with mindset

I've absorbed from him advising me
that loyalty's prerequisite to reciprocity

posted by Sheila Murphy on Wednesday, December 15, 2004

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Sheila, you caught me on this one. very nice, hks

# posted by  harry k stammer on 6:18 AM

 

whispered into templates, one can be splintered
into templates, my first love, the everything you are,
that piecemeal frame I fail to polish, but the birthday
of my first love, the everything you are, you are to fit
with the mindset I've absorbed, so here, you were reciprocity,
whispered into templates, one can be splintered into templates,
one can be the splintered celebration of everything
in the numbers that hold in mind, apart from him, advising me
of that piecemeal frame I fail to move ahead

# posted by  Common Sense on 7:52 AM

 

Jordan, lovely, and I am moved by this. Thank you, Sheil

# posted by  Sheila Murphy on 12:39 PM

 

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